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Problem Dragon Chapter 1

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Problem Dragon

Disclamer: I Don’t own Xiaolin Showdown or any of its characters

Note: This is my First story for Xiaolin Showdown…so the characters may seem a bit off.

I DO own Zena and Alex. They are MINE!!

Summary: Jack, after winning it in a Xiaolin Showdown, has aquired a new shen gon wu, but when he accidently activates it, he gets stuck with taking care of Zena…but who the heck is she?

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“Man, am I sore.”

Jack Spicer said wearily, flopping onto his bed. “Well, at least I won this…what does it even DO?”

Jack had won a strange looking Shen Gon Wu recently against the Dragon of Water, and he had no clue as of what it did. It was in the shape of Wuya’s puzzle box, only the top was the shape of a pyramid.

“I'll figure it out later, right now I have to go fix my Jack-Bots.” He took the wu and went down to his evil lair. Once down there, he tossed the wu onto his chair, and started to work on his broken Jack-bots. He got so into working on them he didn’t realize that the top of the wu had opened, causing a strange light to come out of it.

“Now where’s my wrench…?” He started to feel around for it. Then someone had handed it to him.

“Thanks.”

“No problem.” Jack started to work on the robot again, only realizing he was not alone five minutes later.

“GAHH!!” screaming he jumped up and spun around to face… a young girl who looked around his age.

“You’re funny Jack. I thought you’d scream as soon as I handed you the wrench!”

“…How do you know my name?”

“’Cause… It’s a secret.” Jack looked at the girl. She had bright red hair tied up into a pony tail that was messily trailed down her back, bright gold eyes, and she was wearing a black T-shit, dark black jeans, and a pair of sneakers that had a wheel in them.

“…and who are you?” Jack asked the girl.

“My name is Zena, and you brought me to help you with…what ever it is you need help with.” Zena said happily.

“...ok?” Jack took a few steps backwards. “What's with the face?” Zena asked him. Jack was looking at her like she had grown two heads.

"Nothing...it's just, you look like someone I know." Jack didn't like where this was going. A mysterious girl shows up out of nowhere, knows his name, and has to help him with a problem? He didn't have any problems!

"I don't have any problems. Looks like you came here for no reason." Jack crossed his arms and stuck his tongue out at her. Zena's eyes widened, then she glared at him. Jack shuddered under her glare.

"The wu wouldn't have activated if you didn't have a problem, so either you DEAL WITH IT or I get to make your life a LIVING HELL until I can go home!" Zena growled. There were other places she could... should be right now.

"...Damn, and I thought Chase was scary."

"Hey, I learned from him, so obviously-"

"Chase taught YOU?"

"DUH! He's my dad! What did you expect?" Zena threw her hands up in exagertion. Well, at least now she knew why Alex was stupid.

"Wait...You're Chase's duahgter?" Jack went paler then usual. Zena didn't understand why it was such a big shock to him. It wasnt like he...oh...OH!...ooops.

"...I Knew I forgot something." She muttered under her breath. "Ok, so I guess it is a shock but...Jack? Jack?! JACK!" Zena jumped as Jack passed out falling to the floor.

"Well...at least he didn't scream..."
I took some advice from the comments I got and my friend Rebecca, and this is what happened. So please, read and review. go easy on me PLZ!

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If Chase had a daughter, I highly doubt that she'd have red hair when his is tinted green. Plus, Chase's daughter probably wouldn't be bound to a Shen-Gong-Wu and running around in jeans and wheelies. He's an ancient dragon overlord.

You've got an okay concept going, but you may want to rethink Zena's character design for accuracy's sake. Avoid making her a Mary-Sue.